Week 7A

Today in class we talked briefly about the Zurb conference. Then we had a small critique on our layouts. Some of the feedback I got was:

• watch edge tension on the first page of the secondary layout
• move the page numbers to the corner
• smaller body copy
• simplify images on secondary layout
• tracking between the "I" and the "E" in "Diet"

This is what I fixed today.

I simplified the whipped cream.

I simplified the scale. I only simplified the top of the scale since that is the only thing going to be in the layout.

I switched my typeface from Times New Roman to Cambria.

I also simplified the shortcake cubes.