Monday, December 2, 2013

Week 15A

Today in class we critiqued our first three articles. The feedback that I got was:
Which Gear is Right For You

  • The headband pictures are too large
    • maybe just stick with two types of headbands instead of three
  • Give space under/around the titles and paragraphs
Recovery Drinks
  • Adjust brightness of pictures
    • Maybe even scrap pictures and get new ones
  • Adjust the text - either all left or right justified
How To Prepare For A 5K
  • The titles "Day 1" "Day 2" etc. pull them down to eliminate edge tension

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